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... I really, REALLY need a bigger scanner. I had to scan the half of this piece first, and it gave me a hell trying to put the two parts together so there will be a small line somewhere near his legs (but please don't worry about that!).

The freaky-colored thing in the background was based on a kaleidoscope picture, but if you look closely, you can see it's not symmetrical in the least. I'm a bit ashamed of that, since I really wanted to work hard on this particular piece, but I can still say with certainty that this is one of my favourite pieces of art so far (at least out of what I have done).

Even though I can spot many faults (some are those I have mentioned to you) it would be good if you guys could tell me at which point I should try to improve (by looking at this and my other pictures), or what kind of mistakes I made in the making of this particular one. Be free with your words, but try to be fair and motivate what you think. Balance good and bad.

Oh, and if you're Swedish and want to post an "official" critique post... I'll have to ask you to type in English if you can, so that other artists will be able to see if they think you're comment is fair or not (you're aware of the "fair" and "unfair" buttons, I hope?).

As for an explanation to this picture, well... It's pretty complicated and I feel a bit too tired to try to find the words for it. :)

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:icontamamadesu:
Eek, I wanna save his arm n leg! Dx Anyways, I ish horrible at giving critique, so I'll pass. Buuut, comment; I love all the details and colouring. *_*<33

Keep it up la~ :huggle: !

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I want to go, I want to run, run to the places where I can be. I wanna know, what is the sound. Something reminding me. I want to go, I gotta run. Run the moment they set me free. You tell me why, I hear a sound, the sound of my dreams. ♥
:icon90malik90:
So do I, so do I. :faint:

^_^ Thanks anyway, Rurrr~ :3

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"Idiocy" belongs to Soren as his trademark word.

//Crowley
:iconvelka:
You have worked really great on this picture and I am really bad at giving Critiques. >.< But maybe this will help? :)
[link]

But you have worked great on the details and I really like the work on his leg and arm. XD

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~*It takes some work to make it work.*~

The pixel basse is fromKawaiiHannah.
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I WON THE GAME!!!! 8D :dummy: :woohoo:
:icon90malik90:
Thank you so much! :D I'll check them out!

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"Idiocy" belongs to Soren as his trademark word.

//Crowley
:iconvelka:
hope they can help. ^^

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~*It takes some work to make it work.*~

The pixel basse is fromKawaiiHannah.
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I WON THE GAME!!!! 8D :dummy: :woohoo:
:iconvalerei:
härlig idé och komposition :3
lite sådär lagom plottrig utan att vara för plottrig ändå! *kan absolut inte förklara*

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~Smotth <-my other smaller DA-account, only for fanart
:icon90malik90:
... Plottrig? Menar du de vita prickarna, eller? ._.

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"Idiocy" belongs to Soren as his trademark word.

//Crowley
:iconvalerei:
nej, det att det helt enkelt e mycket med saker på bilden xD

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~Smotth <-my other smaller DA-account, only for fanart
:icon90malik90:
Okej, då är jag glad över att det var bra, då. xD

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"Idiocy" belongs to Soren as his trademark word.

//Crowley

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